Talk:The Boat Race 1937/GA1
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Reviewer: Tim riley (talk · contribs) 12:04, 6 April 2015 (UTC)
Comments
[edit]Taking as read my usual bleat about false titles (Rickett, twice), there are two minor drafting points:
- Background
- "The Light Blues had thirteen consecutive races coming into this year's event" – it looks as though "won" is missing before "thirteen".
- Race
- " umpire Rickett started the race … A false start ensued, with umpire Rickett failing to hear…" – one "umpire" too many? Tim riley talk 12:04, 6 April 2015 (UTC)
Nothing to delay us there, though please tweak. Therefore:
Review summary
[edit]- Is it reasonably well written?
- A. Prose quality:
- B. MoS compliance:
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. References to sources:
- B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- B. Focused:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- Thanks Tim, I've addressed the comments you left. I very much appreciate your interest and ongoing support. The Rambling Man (talk) 12:33, 6 April 2015 (UTC)