Talk:The Boat Race 1857/GA1
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Reviewer: Good888 (talk · contribs) 10:03, 6 November 2014 (UTC)
Had a look at this article and found the following issues:
Images
- "Archibald Levin Smith rowed in the four seat for Cambridge." - change to "occupied the four seat."
- "Edmond Warre rowed at number six for Cambridge." - you mean Oxford?
- Is it possible you could add an image of the course?
- I've reorganised the captions, used a different image template, added the course map. The Rambling Man (talk) 10:43, 6 November 2014 (UTC)
Race
- This section could be expanded. For a start state that Cambridge started at the Surrey station. Also, perhaps you could describe weather conditions and who was favourite to win the race as well.
- I'll work on this right now. The Rambling Man (talk) 10:43, 6 November 2014 (UTC)
- I've added a few more sentences to the Race section, along with a footnote describing an anomaly I just found in sources relating to the winning time. I can't find anything in the online source about weather/favourites other than a allusion to "badness of weather" or "mediocrity of crew", which aren't directly addressing your comment. There may be something in Drinkwater or Burnell but I won't be able to check that until Sunday afternoon. The Rambling Man (talk) 11:15, 6 November 2014 (UTC)
I will promote to GA class if these issues are addressed. good888 (talk) 10:03, 6 November 2014 (UTC)
- Thanks, much appreciated. The Rambling Man (talk) 10:43, 6 November 2014 (UTC)
- Nice job! Going to promote this to GA class now. Fingers crossed that you will find more infomation in those two books! good888 (talk) 12:04, 6 November 2014 (UTC)