Talk:The Boat (The Office)/GA1
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Reviewer: Ed! (talk · contribs) 12:42, 14 December 2012 (UTC)
- Is there a promotional image we can use? Currently there's nothing to depict the actual episode.
- Normally the different subplots are grouped into single paragraphs each to tell the complete storyline. This one seems to bounce around a little.
- You didn't include the end of the Dwight subplot, was wondering what the reason was. It leaves the last line of the "Production" section confusing for a person who hasn't watched the episode.
- The guest appearances by Jack Coleman and Andy Buckley should be noted and cited in the production section, alongside Josh Groban. It would also be helpful to note when Buckeley last appeared, since he isn't a regular face on the show.
- Dup link tool shows four duplicate links: John Krasinksi, Josh Groban, The Office (U.S. season 8), and Rainn Wilson.
- Dab link tool shows no problems. However, the Seattle PI link is dead and needs to be replaced.
- Will return. —Ed!(talk) 13:25, 14 December 2012 (UTC)
- Since it looks like there wasn't a ton of editing happening to fix this article up, I went ahead and fixed most of the issues. I hope that is alright.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 17:19, 18 December 2012 (UTC)
- Ah, fantastic. You've addressed all of my questions so I'll pass the GA now. Thanks for helping! —Ed!(talk) 17:37, 18 December 2012 (UTC)
- Since it looks like there wasn't a ton of editing happening to fix this article up, I went ahead and fixed most of the issues. I hope that is alright.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 17:19, 18 December 2012 (UTC)