Talk:The Blood Red Tape of Charity

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Review: January 9, 2014. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review

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Reviewer: Good888 (talk · contribs) 10:04, 3 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Just a few issues in this article:

Lead section

"The unbilled cast list has been stated to include Lon Chaney scholars in the role of the pawn broker." Remove the word scholars from this sentence and link Lon Chaney.

Release

"The film was released nationwide with ads for its viewing in El Paso, Texas, Chicago, Illinois, Indiana, Iowa, Ohio, Nebraska, Kansas, and Pennsylvania." I would change ads to advertisements. Also link all of the places please.

Reception

"Jon C. Mirsalis's website cites a review in Moving Picture World" Link Moving Picture World.
"Another ad would cite the New York World" Link New York World.
"makes The Blood Red Tape of Charity into propaganda film by definition. A propaganda film you mean.
"The film is now considered lost." Mind if you expand on this, similar to how you did in The Tramp Dentists article?

References

Link the publishers of these sources, such as Indiana University Press.

Other than that, I am happy with this lost film article. I will promote once the issues are addressed. good888 (talk) 10:04, 3 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

@Good888: Fixes done. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 02:26, 9 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Nice job. Promoting to GA class. good888 (talk) 09:43, 9 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

@Good888: Thanks, I've gone in and did a bunch of date and publisher link fixes in advance for the other GANs now. If I get a few more McFarland books I will be able to complete the filmography without too much trouble. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 15:30, 9 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]