Talk:The Beyond (1981 film)/GA1
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Reviewer: Casliber (talk · contribs) 20:39, 3 October 2021 (UTC)
Hi - I'll make copyedits as I go (please revert if I inadvertently change the meaning) and jot queries below: Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 20:39, 3 October 2021 (UTC)
The plot section does not specify that it's in a town in Louisiana (does it have a name?) - sounds weird when later there is a comment about no blind woman living in the town...
I haven't seen the film but am very familiar with the Cthulhu mythos - is the book called "Eibon" or "Book of Eibon" in the film?
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and the other recently deceased.- umm...a noun at the end of this sentence needed?
Otherwise looks fairly comprehensive Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 10:41, 4 October 2021 (UTC)
- Hi, Cas Liber! Thanks very much for your review so far. I've made some changes based on your advice - the film is specifically set in New Orleans, and the book is simply called "Eibon" rather than the "Book of Eibon". PatTheMoron (talk) 02:11, 9 November 2021 (UTC)
- Dang that sucks! The Philistines! M'kay will have another look....Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 03:59, 9 November 2021 (UTC)
1. Well written?:
- Prose quality:
- Manual of Style compliance:
2. Factually accurate and verifiable?:
- References to sources:
- Citations to reliable sources, where required:
- No original research:
3. Broad in coverage?:
- Major aspects:
- Focused:
4. Reflects a neutral point of view?:
- Fair representation without bias:
5. Reasonably stable?
- No edit wars, etc. (Vandalism does not count against GA):
6. Illustrated by images, when possible and appropriate?:
- Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
Overall:
- Pass or Fail: - great, well done. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 04:17, 9 November 2021 (UTC)