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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 03:01, 7 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Issues:

  • Lede: Link American to Television in the United States
  • Lede: For second paragraph, add "In the episode, "
  • Lede: critics → television critics
  • Reception: Fox Network → Fox network

That's all. Great work. TBrandley 21:20, 7 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Done and done. Thanks for the review! GRAPPLE X 21:28, 7 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]