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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 03:01, 7 July 2012 (UTC)
Issues:
- Lede: Link American to Television in the United States
- Lede: For second paragraph, add "In the episode, "
- Lede: critics → television critics
- Reception: Fox Network → Fox network
That's all. Great work. TBrandley 21:20, 7 July 2012 (UTC)
- Done and done. Thanks for the review! GRAPPLE X 21:28, 7 July 2012 (UTC)