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Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 03:53, 4 April 2020 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall: Pass
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
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[edit]- Is there a better reference than this one? If not, please archive it through the Wayback Machine in case it changes.
- I added a Wayback Machine archive url.
- Reference 32 seems unneeded (see Wikipedia:Citation overkill)
- I deleted it.
- Is there a better reference than the video itself to cite for the claim "Time of the Season" by The Ben Taylor Band served as the theme song of the series."
- Not particularly, but there is a Reddit thread stating it was "Time of the Season"; however, Reddit isn't a credible source. It's listed in the Spotify playlist also referenced in the article.
- Reference 12 is from May but is sourced for a claim for November. Can you find an updated reference?
- The claim from November is no longer accurate since James Charles has since recoved from the 3 million subscriber drop. I reworded the sentence to make sense for the claim in May.
- Reference 42 does not support its claim. It just shows it was trending, not that it "peaking at #1 for seven hours and staying within the top ten for fourteen hours."
- I changed the wording to "became the #1 trending topic for several hours", which can clearly be seen in the source.
- @HickoryOughtShirt?4: I will requested for a copyedit to be done on this page in order to better the prose. Jayab314 13:20, 4 April 2020 (UTC)
- Jayab314, thanks. Honestly, this is an easy pass. Just let me know when the copyedit is done. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 17:35, 4 April 2020 (UTC)
- @HickoryOughtShirt?4: The copyedit is done. Jayab314 12:55, 26 April 2020 (UTC)
- Thanks and congrats! HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 19:16, 26 April 2020 (UTC)