Talk:The Beatles' 1966 tour of Germany, Japan and the Philippines/GA1
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Reviewer: Mike Christie (talk · contribs) 09:55, 21 February 2018 (UTC)
I'll review this. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 09:55, 21 February 2018 (UTC)
I'll copyedit as I go; please revert if I make a mess of anything.
- Not an issue for GA, but [1] is a dead link.
an album that reflected a more experimental approach as well as the increasing division between the music they made as live performers
: suggest adding "and their studio work" to the end.
That's all I can find. The prose is in very good shape. I see no reason to delay GA status for these minor points, so I am promoting. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 10:44, 21 February 2018 (UTC)
- Mike Christie, wow, thanks. Quick and painless. (Funny thing is, I thought I'd pulled this from the nominations list in August, before going away for a month!) Thanks again, I'll be sure to look into those two issues you've raised. JG66 (talk) 13:11, 21 February 2018 (UTC)