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Reviewer: Dom497 (talk · contribs) 16:20, 22 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Well if someone was to create their own version of an image that would be a copyright violation of the original media. Harry Potter and the Forbidden Journey has a similar non-free image of the ride's projections. Themeparkgc  Talk  06:24, 29 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
As noted in the image description, this was extracted from the Spider-Man patent (US6095926). I converted it to an SVG. Themeparkgc  Talk  06:24, 29 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • The "Reception" and a little bit of the "Production" sections should be mentioned in the lead.
Done Themeparkgc  Talk  06:24, 29 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • "On May 28, 1999, the attraction officially opened to the public" - There's got to be a better reference supporting this statment. Same goes with the following sentance.
Unfortunately I can't find anything else specific to the individual attraction's opening. Themeparkgc  Talk  06:24, 29 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • Ref 4 does not mention anything about Infitec projectors or when the ride re-opened.
Added extra refs Themeparkgc  Talk  06:24, 29 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • "In 2013, the attraction at Universal Studios Japan underwent a similar refurbishment with 4KHD projections being deployed. The refurbished attraction opened on July 5, 2013" - I don't read japanese and got lost in the ref. I couldn't find anything that said the refurb was in 2013 or that the ride re-opened in July.
That website does have some English in it and they were the two details I was able to extract. For example the website compares the original projection with the 4KHD projection (the latter is labelled in English. Also, at the top of the page, it has a date 7/5 = July 5 which aligns with the information you can find in other non-reliable sources. Anyway, I found an English press release to support it. Themeparkgc  Talk  06:24, 29 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • You can stick refs 6 and 7 at the end of the "Queue" section. No need to repeat it several times.
Done Themeparkgc  Talk  06:24, 29 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • "...sending the Scoop on a 400-foot (120 m) simulated freefall..." - I don't think you have to mention the 400-foot part again. You already stated that riders were 400 feet high earlier.
Done Themeparkgc  Talk  06:24, 29 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • Ref 16 and 25 are dead.
Done Themeparkgc  Talk  06:24, 29 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • Is IMDb reliable?
Removed Themeparkgc  Talk  06:24, 29 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The track was manufactured by Dynamic Structures." - Ref 19 does not support this.
Fixed link Themeparkgc  Talk  06:24, 29 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Each vehicle is fitted with a motor that controls the right side door through which guests board and leave" - Ref?
Removed Themeparkgc  Talk  06:24, 29 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

On hold for 7 days--Dom497 (talk) 16:53, 22 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

@Dom497: Sorry, I've been away. I will look into this within the next 48 hours. Themeparkgc  Talk  08:37, 28 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
No worries. :) --Dom497 (talk) 16:26, 28 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
@Dom497: Themeparkgc  Talk  06:24, 29 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Pass!--Dom497 (talk) 04:12, 31 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
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