Talk:That's the Woman I Want

That's the Woman I Want has been listed as one of the Media and drama good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Review: April 9, 2020. (Reviewed version).

This article was improved from stub-class to GA-class during the WikiChallenge Venezuela edit-a-thon hosted by WikiProject Venezuela. The editor(s) involved may be new; please assume good faith regarding their contributions before making changes.

A fact from That's the Woman I Want appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 1 February 2020 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that marketing for the Venezuelan film That's the Woman I Want told prospective viewers it was so funny they would forget about foot-and-mouth disease?

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GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:That's the Woman I Want/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 14:51, 7 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Going to review this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 14:51, 7 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Pilot

"Lindolfo Chaves is the president of a tobacco company based in Havana," - more concise president of a Havana-based tobacco company
"his doctor diagnoses him with a heart murmur" - what type of heart murmur?
"his uncle's arrival comes at a bad time for Ruperto: " - try not to use word such as "at a bad time"
"with the help of Sócrates, Ruperto's butler," - how about with the help of Ruperto's butler Sócrates instead?
"the three characters play out the farce in front of Uncle Lindolfo. Lindolfo believes the ruse" - Try not to have the last word of a sentence start the next one like this

Production

"by company Bolívar Films," - perhaps clarify what type of company Bolívar Films was
"as an opportunity to create his own feature in Venezuela." - feature film
"and used the same crew as El demonio es un ángel." - from

Marketing and release

Please state briefly who María Gabriela Colmenares is
"Some of these slogans explicitly promoted the famous Venezuelan composer Eduardo Serrano," - the word "famous" isn't needed IMO
"Some of the promotions before release also include newspaper interviews," - promotions of the film before its release
"The press release on the day of premiere, Colmenares explains" - In the press release on the day of the premiere, Colmenares explains that it,
Also, is the press release from Bolivar Films or another entity? It would help for clarity

Analysis

"Colmenares writes (in 1999 and 2005) that" - I don't feel that the parentheses are needed as it looks like a sidenote instead
"Azuaga García also notes that That's the Woman I Want is, along with The Yacht Isabel Arrived This Afternoon, "the most representative," - The Yacht Isabel Arrived This Afternoon are "the most representative,"
"In 2009, Colmenares looked at the credits of the film," - more formal; observed

Sources

Be consistent in listing the location field in the sources where possible

Am going to place the review on hold to enable the nominator to action/respond to the queries raised above. MWright96 (talk) 08:49, 8 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

- Thank you a detailed review - I think I've done everything except the heart murmur, which the film only calls a heart murmur. Kingsif (talk) 17:18, 8 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  - @Kingsif: Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 17:30, 9 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]