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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 16:43, 30 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]


Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 16:43, 30 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

  • "competing in alpine skiing." Add that both are competing.
  • "Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada." Could be shortened to just "Vancouver."
  • "Thailand first joined Olympic competition at the 1952 Summer Olympics in Helsinki, and excepting the boycotted 1980 Summer Olympics they have participated in every Summer Olympics since." Rephrase to "Thailand first joined Olympic competition at the 1952 Summer Olympics in Helsinki and have participated in every Summer Olympics since, except the boycotted 1980 Summer Olympics."
  • "Thailand had two male athletes that met the standard, and chose to send the one that was born in Thailand and had qualified for more events." Who was the other one?
  • "of the slalom race. [13]" Remove space after sentence.
  • "but the Court of Arbitration for Sport (CAS) overturned the finding of the FIS." Why?

Short interesting article. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 23:32, 31 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]