Talk:Terropterus/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Simongraham (talk · contribs) 19:12, 31 July 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• "more sparse " – consider rewording as some people prefer "sparser".

changed "arranged in a more sparse manner" to "arranged more sparsely". Ichthyovenator (talk) 00:32, 1 August 2021 (UTC)

• In the lead, it states that the species is the only mixopterid known from Gondwana while the body states that it is "the first known mixopterid from the southern continent of Gondwana". Please clarify.

It basically means the same thing - it's the first one to be discovered from Gondwana, so is also the only one known so far. I've changed things around so that it now just goes with "only one known" in both places. Ichthyovenator (talk) 00:32, 1 August 2021 (UTC)

• Link carapace, family, genus and phylogenetic.

Done. Ichthyovenator (talk) 00:32, 1 August 2021 (UTC)

@Ichthyovenator: Thank you for making these amendments. The article is now ready to review. simongraham (talk) 13:15, 1 August 2021 (UTC)

Assessment

1. Comprehension: The comprehension is good.
Undetermined

Criteria	Notes	Result
(a) (prose)	The prose is generally clear, concise and understandable.	Pass
(b) (MoS)	The article is compliant with the manual of style.	Pass

2. Verifiability: The article is verifiable.
Pass

Criteria	Notes	Result
(a) (references)	The article has a list of references and in-line citations for its contents in the body.	Pass
(b) (citations to reliable sources)	Sources used are reliable.	Pass
(c) (original research)	No original research found.	Pass
(d) (copyvio and plagiarism)	No flagrant copyright issues found with Earwig's Copyvio Detector.	Pass

3. Comprehensiveness: The article is comprehensive.
Pass

Criteria	Notes	Result
(a) (major aspects)	The article broadly covers all major aspects.	Pass
(b) (focused)	The article is focused without unnecessary deviations.	Pass

4. Neutrality: The article is neutral.
Pass

Notes	Result
The article is compliant with the policy on neutral point of view.	Pass

5. Stability: The article is stable.
Pass

Notes	Result
No ongoing content disputes or edit wars present.	Pass

6. Illustration: The article is well illustrated.
Pass

Criteria	Notes	Result
(a) (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales)	No copyright issues found, images are appropriately tagged.	Pass
(b) (appropriate use with suitable captions)	Use and captions are good.	Pass

7. Overall: Pass/fail.
Pass

Notes	Result
Congratulations, Ichthyovenator. The article meets the criteria to be a Good Article.	Pass

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