Talk:Telok Ayer MRT station/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 18:54, 29 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

Downtown/Circle - is it Line or line, there seems to be inconsistency in usage here and in those articles too.
- Done
"raxi" you mean taxi?
- Fixed
"the Land Transport Authority " link.
Put (LTA) after it too as you use that.
- both done
"the 3.4 kilometres (2.1 mi) Downtown" adj=on
- Fixed
"Downtown Extension" was "Downtown extension" in the lead.
- Fixed
"Samsung Corporation and Soletanche Bachy France" links?
- There's a link to Samsung Corporation but it seems no page has been created for Soletanche Bachy France, despite it being a rather prominent company (plenty of search results). A French version exists.--ZKang123 (talk) 12:28, 31 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"viaduct began on 3 February 2008[14] and the viaduct opened " repetitive.
- Done
"opened over time" vague, almost meaningless.
- Fixed With specifications on the period.--ZKang123 (talk) 12:28, 31 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"the diaphragm walls adopted" link?
- Done
"proceed to line" proceeded.
- Shortened to just "lined". Proceeded seems unnecessary.--ZKang123 (talk)
"largely yellow palms" largely? And is there a link for "yellow palm"?
- Fixed
"Downtown line (DTL) and" you mentioned the Downtown line in the previous section, so put the initialism (DTL) there, and use it here.
- Done
"and Chinatown stations" overlinked.
- Done
"including Far East Bank Building" etc, "including the Far East..."
- Done
"blends with the other shophouses" shouldn't be Wikipedia saying this, it may have been designed to blend, but that is in the eye of the beholder.
- Done used "intended".--ZKang123 (talk) 12:28, 31 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"reflecting the design's functionality that remains appealing to commuters" guidebook.
- Fixed
Check all refs have publication and/or access dates.
- Fixed
Ref 24 should be pp.
- Fixed

That's all I have for now. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 19:08, 29 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]