Talk:Tell the Vision/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Zmbro (talk · contribs) 12:37, 1 October 2021 (UTC)

Like we agreed. – zmbro _(talk) 12:37, 1 October 2021 (UTC)

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Infobox and lead

• No recording dates/ranges?

• Not that is known of, sorry. --K. Peake 12:42, 2 October 2021 (UTC)

• Does drill apply to both versions? Jw

• The NPR review also calls it drill; I have mentioned this in prose now! --K. Peake 12:42, 2 October 2021 (UTC)

• Shouldn't all writers be linked the first time?

• See WP:OVERLINK to understand why some are not linked here. --K. Peake 12:42, 2 October 2021 (UTC)

• Shouldn't West just be labeled as "West" in producers?

• This is not a track listing; remember Template:Infobox song. --K. Peake 12:42, 2 October 2021 (UTC)

• A choir from what?

• I did some research into this now, but unfortunately I can't find anything regarding where the choir are sampled from. --K. Peake 12:42, 2 October 2021 (UTC)

Background and development

• Looks good

Music and lyrics

• Same questions from above related to this section apply here

• See previous. --K. Peake 12:42, 2 October 2021 (UTC)

• Rest looks good

Release and reception

• Any reviews for the Donda version?

•  Done I have added some now --K. Peake 12:42, 2 October 2021 (UTC)

Commercial performance

• Looks good

Credits and personnel

• Looks good

Charts

• Looks good

Notes and references

• I would add a source for the note just to be safe

•  Done --K. Peake 12:42, 2 October 2021 (UTC)

• Make sure instances of the album titles are italicized throughout

•  Done apart from Tidal refs --K. Peake 12:42, 2 October 2021 (UTC)

• Rest looks good

Final thoughts

• Very well done overall, don't have too many complaints. Should be a GA in no time! – zmbro _(talk) 14:00, 1 October 2021 (UTC)

• Zmbro Thank you, I have covered everything now! --K. Peake 12:42, 2 October 2021 (UTC)

• Fantastic. Happy to ✓ Pass – zmbro _(talk) 13:18, 2 October 2021 (UTC)