Talk:Technology in Drum Corps International
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[edit]1. Article is easy to understand and provides a general impact of technology on drum corps. Does really well with history section.
2. Some wording change. for the large blockquote, only keep the necessary parts of it because it unnecessarily takes up a lot of space
3. Doing well in terms of contribution. Make sure to add links for those who don't know what certain terms are (battery, DCI etc)
4. I liked the way you organized the article. Start out with relevant history, then go into the details of specific components. History section goes in chronological order and contains no extraneous information. Will add a history section myself and will try to employ these ideas
Edits: Reword first sentence. "phenomenon" can have double meaningPraneetmek (talk) 14:48, 22 October 2019 (UTC)
Title of article
[edit]This needs a simpler title that can be linked from other Wikipedia articles to better integrate this article into the rest of the encyclopedia. See Wikipedia:Article titles. I would suggest simply "Drum corp technology".Samw (talk) 14:51, 30 October 2019 (UTC)
- Samw Just saw this, but already retitled. Feel free to retitle again for reduced verbiage. Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:25, 1 November 2019 (UTC)