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Reviewer: The C of E (talk · contribs) 07:40, 2 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

But, as it also says "all quotations must include an inline citation to a reliable source that directly supports it." ℛonherry 16:43, 6 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Numerous fans and consumer groups alleged that Ticketmaster is deceitful", is or were?
I agree that it should be past tense, but shouldn't it be "was" instead of "were"? Ticketmaster has been referred to as a singular entity throughout the articles, just like in the sources. ℛonherry 16:45, 6 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • As per MOS:ACRO1STUSE, the United Kingdom should be spelt out first and then UK/British afterwards (not U.K.)
  • "Ticketmaster was a subject", "a subject" or "the subject"?
  • "both Ticketmaster and Live Nation received backlash and media attention", from whom?
  • In the Taylor Swift section, scalpers shouldn't be linked as it was already linked in the earlier Company section.
  • "either completely logged out or in a queue 2,000-plus people strong that appeared frozen.", who said that? Also per MOS:PF, the punctuation should be at the end.
  • "trust an outside entity with these relationships and loyalties", inline cite needed
  • Why are the lawsuit sections in bullet points? As per WP:BULLET, it says "They are not appropriate for large paragraphs"
    • Same for political sections
  • What is "Tickets today" and why is there no other mention of it in the article? As would be expected for a section header
It's a secondary platform that Ticketmaster used to sell the remaining tickets before the website crashed. It was their solution to the crisis, apparently. ℛonherry 16:55, 6 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • What area does AOC represent in the House?
    • Same for Pascrel and all other House reps and Senators
I've mentioned Pascrel and AOC's districts now. For those who hold bigger offices, like the chair of a committee, I think their biggest designation is enough, like in Klobuchar's case? ℛonherry 17:08, 6 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]