Talk:Tawang Monastery/GA1
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Reviewer: Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk · contribs) 21:27, 14 August 2015 (UTC)
Will start soon.--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 21:27, 14 August 2015 (UTC)
- A few comments for now:
- Please reorder citations that look like this "[1][24][13]"
- Had to reorder twice due to some technical glitch
- Last sentence in article lacks a full stop.
- Lst sentences have been deleted as they were posted by some other user
- Last couple sentences in the article lacks a citation
- Last sentence without citation deleted
- Why does it have "tourism website" on the bottom of the page?
- Some other user has added this much later than my posting the artcile for GAN. Te sentences stand deleted now.
- The last sentence is a travel suggestion. I'm pretty sure that falls evenly into "What Wikipedia is not".
- Some other user has added this much later than my posting the artcile for GAN. Te sentences stand deleted now.
- What source does the "Shakya 2012" cite point to?
- Over sight miss. Now fixed reference with correct page number
--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 11:56, 17 August 2015 (UTC)
- @Tomandjerry211 (alt): Thanks for the review. I have addressed all above issues. Any other suggestions welcome.--Nvvchar. 13:56, 17 August 2015 (UTC)
- Two last comments:
- Please use AmE or BrE, not both. Examples include "centre, honour, travelled" vs "meter, defense and -ization".--Tomandjerry211 (alt)talk) 14:32, 17 August 2015 (UTC)
- Hopefully I have done it wherever I could locate in the text.
- Last sentence in "Features" section requires citation.--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 14:32, 17 August 2015 (UTC)
- Cited now
- @Tomandjerry211 (alt): Thanks for the final comments. I hope I have complied fully.--Nvvchar. 02:04, 18 August 2015 (UTC)
- Passing, Well done.--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 10:58, 18 August 2015 (UTC)
- @Tomandjerry211 (alt): Thanks you very much for approving this GAN. Every time you approve I have to make a request to leave message of its approval on my talk page as the auto bot does not work on my page.--Nvvchar. 00:28, 19 August 2015 (UTC)