Talk:Targit (company)
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I noticed how TARGIT was not mentioned in: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Business_intelligence_tools
I started writing an article about the company and I do believe I have refered to credible, independent sources in the article. The article and the content of it does not differ from many of the other articles listed in: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Business_intelligence_tools
I will go through it again, but would like to specifically what is wrong. If the title sounds like advertising, I can change it into "TARGIT A/S" since "TARGIT" is taken. But the A/S is a Danish acronym for Limited Company/Inc.
Stemmen 14:43, 16 February 2011 (UTC)
Just edited the text
Stemmen 14:53, 16 February 2011 (UTC)
- I've made a copyedit pass and removed anything overtly promotional. I'd suggest changing some of the Gartner quotes to prose (too many long, direct quotes becomes a problem) and including some of the balancing information from the same source. Will do this if I get a chance later. Kuru (talk) 16:53, 16 February 2011 (UTC)