Talk:Tammy Abraham/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 17:54, 28 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Going to review this. MWright96 (talk) 17:54, 28 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Early career

"Abraham joined Chelsea at U8 level and progressed through the clubs academy system." - under-8 level and also club's
"He was part of the Chelsea youth team which recorded back to back triumphs in both the UEFA Youth League and the FA Youth Cup in 2015 and 2016." - consecutive
"He carried his form over in to the FA Youth Cup " - into

2016–17 season: Loan to Bristol City

"helping Bristol City advance to the Second round of the EFL Cup." - don't captalise the start of Second round
Wikilink EFL's Young Player of the Month to EFL Young Player of the Month
"Abraham scored his 16th Championship goal in the 2–2 draw against Sheffield Wednesday," - in a 2–2 draw

2017–18 season: Loan to Swansea City

"opening the scoring in a 2–0 win over Crystal Palace." - victory for some variety

England youth national teams

"Abraham has represented England at both U18 and U19 level." - spell out U18 and U19
"netting a brace as England U18 beat Switzerland 6–1." - defeated

References

References 3, 10, 11, 27 & 42 is dead and require archiving
There is no access date to Reference 12
Reference 37 is lacking the author
Reference 40 is missing the author and publication date

That is all I found during my read-through. On hold. MWright96 (talk) 09:37, 29 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Hi MWright96, thank you for the review. I've tackled all the points raised in respect of the body. I'll look to have the referencing sorted out by the end of the weekend. Cheers, Liam E. Bekker (talk) 10:10, 29 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Alright MWright96, here's what I've done. Ref 3 was archived by another user (thank you kind stranger). I couldn't archive 10 and 11 so replaced them with a singular ref which encompassed all of the content. I removed refs 27 & 42 as the refs following directly after them already also covered all of the content - helps with overlinking too. Also, in my previous edits, at your first point under Bristol City, I've capitalised 'Round' instead of removing the capital letter from 'Second'. It now reads Second Round which seems to be the common way of doing it. Let me know if there are any other changes that need to be made. Cheers, Liam E. Bekker (talk) 09:25, 2 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Liam E. Bekker: Nothing else from me. Can now promote this article to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 13:48, 2 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]