Talk:Talking to Yourself/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Unlimitedlead (talk · contribs) 00:05, 3 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@MaranoFan: It is a pleasure to work with you once again. I will take on this GA review; please bear with me. Unlimitedlead (talk) 00:05, 3 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Thrilled that you are reviewing this, Unlimitedlead!! The pleasure is most definitely mutual :) --N Ø 04:53, 3 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):

b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a. (reference section):

b. (citations to reliable sources):

c. (OR):

d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a. (major aspects):

b. (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):

b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/fail:

(Criteria marked are unassessed)

Lead

"Jepsen wrote it with songwriter Simon Wilcox, and Benjamin Berger and Ryan Rabin from its production team Captain Cuts": What are you referring to when you say "its"? Are Berger and Rabin not humans?
I would introduce Schoolboy Records and Interscope Records as record labels.

Background and release

"Jepsen announced that the album, titled The Loneliest Time, will be released on October 21, 2022": As you are talking about a past event, "will be" should be "would be".
"Jepsen wrote "Talking to Yourself" alongside songwriter Simon Wilcox, and Benjamin Berger and Ryan Rabin from its production team Captain Cuts": See point above about the "its".
"School Boy and Interscope Records released...": See point above about introducing them.
"...along with a music video, as the album's third single, three days later": What are all these commas for?

Composition and lyrics

"...Eli Heisler, Berger and Wilcox programmed it...": Shouldn't this comma be a semicolon?
"pulsating, beat-driven": Why are there quotation marks? Is this someone speaking (if so, source the statement), or just scare quotes?

Critical reception

"Consequence picked the track as...": Consequence should be in italics.

Images

Can you add {{cc-by-2.0}} {{FlickreviewR|status=passed|author=Raph_PH|sourceurl=https://flickr.com/photos/69880995@N04/48986111926|archive=|reviewdate=2020-03-15 14:26:33|reviewlicense=cc-by-2.0|reviewer=FlickreviewR 2}} to File:Carly Rae Jepsen Primavera19 -146 (48986111926) (cropped).jpg?

Unfortunately, my attempt to add this to the file page was thwarted by a message saying "You do not have the permission to review images, this edit was therefore disabled". Everything else addressed upto here!--N Ø 04:53, 3 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

How strange; it did not let me to so either. Oh well. In any case, I will pass this GA nomination. It was wonderful working with you again on a quality article, and I hope to see more from you soon. Unlimitedlead (talk) 12:17, 3 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]