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Rewrite needed

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dont delete this page. i would of never watched the tv movie had it not been for this page----BlueStar

It's written in different tenses and reads like a child wrote it.

Can someone please rewrite it? I started editing but my brain died part way through due to the writing being so retarded.Still polaris (talk) 03:14, 15 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I second the comment by user "Still polaris". The text is full of typos and structural errors. Someone with a better grip on the English language than me please clean it up. As is, this entry casts a VERY bad light on Wikipedia. -- MF
Sorry, but did a child write this? Articles like this don't belong on Wikipedia. 109.150.120.173 (talk) 18:28, 9 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]