Talk:Take a Bow (Madonna song)/GA1
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Reviewer: HĐ (talk · contribs) 05:57, 30 April 2016 (UTC)
Full review coming within seven days. — Simon (talk) 05:57, 30 April 2016 (UTC)
- Lead
- Link single
- "Following her controversial explicit persona with previous album" → what's the title of the album? And what does that "explicit persona" represent?
- "talks lyrically" → lyrically talks
- Link music critics
- "soulful, poetic" → soul and poetic
- "reaching at number..." → reaching number
- "was filmed in Ronda, Spain and the bullrings in the city" → was filmed at the bullrings in Ronda, Spain
- "The plot depicts" → Replace the plot with the video
- "included about its plotline" → included its plotline
- Background
- "Musically she wanted" → comma
- "She incorporated it in..." → It was included on...
- "explained that" → explained
- "After searching" → can you clarify what she searched for?
- "called Babyface to set up a meeting and see if" → tense problem here
- "maxi-single" → maxi single
- Allmusic → AllMusic
— More to come. Simon (talk) 10:15, 7 May 2016 (UTC)
- Composition
- recorded at The Hit Factory studios in New York, and was mastered and mixed at Sterling Sound Studios, New York → recorded at... studios, New York, and...
- behind the adultery → behind adultery
- Critical + commercial reception
- Well organised and written
- Overall
- The other sections seem well crafted
- The notes at the bottom of {{Certification Table Bottom}} seem useless and should be omitted
- @IndianBio: On hold for seven days. — Simon (talk) 09:10, 11 May 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you, I will start working on it now. —IB [ Poke ] 09:29, 11 May 2016 (UTC)
- Hello @HĐ: I have changed all the comments, except the certification table bottom. If I remove it, it merges into the other section. And I don't know why, there were previous symbols associated, might be a temporary template glitch. —IB [ Poke ] 11:58, 13 May 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you, I will start working on it now. —IB [ Poke ] 09:29, 11 May 2016 (UTC)
- @IndianBio: For the certification table perhaps you should add |format=2col at the {{Certification Table Bottom}}. I appreciate your effort. I'm passing this article. Great work! — Simon (talk) 12:39, 13 May 2016 (UTC)