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Reviewer:  (talk · contribs) 05:57, 30 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]


Full review coming within seven days. — Simon (talk) 05:57, 30 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Lead
  • Link single
  • "Following her controversial explicit persona with previous album" → what's the title of the album? And what does that "explicit persona" represent?
  • "talks lyrically" → lyrically talks
  • Link music critics
  • "soulful, poetic" → soul and poetic
  • "reaching at number..." → reaching number
  • "was filmed in Ronda, Spain and the bullrings in the city" → was filmed at the bullrings in Ronda, Spain
  • "The plot depicts" → Replace the plot with the video
  • "included about its plotline" → included its plotline
Background
  • "Musically she wanted" → comma
  • "She incorporated it in..." → It was included on...
  • "explained that" → explained
  • "After searching" → can you clarify what she searched for?
  • "called Babyface to set up a meeting and see if" → tense problem here
  • "maxi-single" → maxi single
  • Allmusic → AllMusic

— More to come. Simon (talk) 10:15, 7 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Composition
  • recorded at The Hit Factory studios in New York, and was mastered and mixed at Sterling Sound Studios, New York → recorded at... studios, New York, and...
  • behind the adultery → behind adultery
Critical + commercial reception
  • Well organised and written
Overall