Talk:Tajikistan at the 2016 Summer Paralympics/GA1
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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 12:45, 10 November 2018 (UTC)
- I'll do these five over the next 24-48 hours. Courcelles (talk) 12:45, 10 November 2018 (UTC)
- "He was accompanied by chairman of" by the chairman
- Could use a comma after the chairman's name, I think.
- "handed a quota space" makes it sound like it was a gift, not something he had earned.
- How many total runners in the 100m race?
That's all from me. Courcelles (talk) 12:53, 10 November 2018 (UTC)
- @Courcelles: Have done all of the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 13:37, 10 November 2018 (UTC)
- very good, promoted. Courcelles (talk) 13:40, 10 November 2018 (UTC)