Talk:Tabula Rasa (Lost)/GA1

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Reviewer: Hahc21 (talk · contribs) 18:40, 16 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

"Jack later tells Kate that the past does not matter, they all died when the plane crashed." --> what?
"decides to end the marshal's misery by shooting him in the heart." --> remove the verbose. I think it's best to say "decides to kill the Marshal by shooting him in the heart" or something.
"He misses and punctures the marshal's lung, putting him in even more pain" use a full stop there.
"The episode is called this" --> "The episode received this name"

All done! Thanks @Igordebraga:! -Newyorkadam (talk) 01:16, 20 March 2014 (UTC)Newyorkadam[reply]

I fixed the lead and Production, can you continue the review, @Hahc21:? igordebraga ≠ 13:58, 22 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I will tonight. Thanks! → Call me Hahc21 19:58, 22 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Okay. I took a look at the rest of the article and it all looks perfectly fine. I'm promoting. → Call me Hahc21 16:30, 25 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]