Talk:T-Systems

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Lead section appears to have been written by a non-native speaker.

Lead Section
Elide ellipses'
"It operates in 24 countries (Germany, France, Spain, Italy, South Africa, India ...)"
Should either list them all or should say "It operates in 24 countries, including Germany, France, Spain, Italy, South Africa, and India."

Clean Tense
of which 15,000 ~~are~~ make up its Systems Integration unit.

Eliminate marketing language
"Based on strategic considerations and thorough market surveys, T-Systems, as a large start-up, chose a clear and consistent message leveraging high tech sailing imagery for its entry into the Information and Communications Technology (ICT) business customer market."
Consider something like this instead: "When Deutsche Telekom AG relaunched T-Systems as the brand for its Information and Communications Technology (ICT) business customer market in 2005, it marketed itself with an image of high-tech sailing."

Contracts section
“Eight-year contract from Spanish Prestige Hoteles.” (I don’t find a Prestige Hoteles. Is this a typo?)

Recent news
Contract with Cognizant is no longer recent.

Katharine908 (talk) 17:29, 30 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Last edited at 17:29, 30 September 2009 (UTC). Substituted at 07:31, 30 April 2016 (UTC)

Controversies

This section should be removed because it implies that T-Systems Hungary is a part of (German) T-Systems. This is not correct: T-Systems Hungary Ltd. is a 100 % subsidiary of Magyar Telekom, which is held by Deutsche Telekom by 59.21 percent (see here). It is (or may be considered as) part of the Deutsche Telekom Group, but not of T-Systems International GmbH. --UweRohwedder (talk) 09:59, 12 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]