Talk:Sympathy/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Σ (talk · contribs) 07:23, 27 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I have failed the article, per unaddressed maintenance tags present (I stopped reading after a quick glance at the TOC). This review was not based on GA criteria, but rather, the standards expected of all Wikipedia articles. →Σ τ c. 07:23, 27 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Σ- Hello there! I was wondering if you could expand on some of your critiques so that I can improve the 'Sympathy' article. What specifically should be changed to make the article less essay-like? In terms of the TOC, I tried to incorporate all important knowledge regarding sympathy in a format that first provided general information and then was divided in a way that let individuals access sections that they might be interested in. Any help would be greatly appreciated. --Nguyen.M.T (talk) 03:36, 1 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]