Talk:Syed Wadal Shah

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hi, Thanks for your observations on the article "Syed Wadal Shah". My response to the observations is as under: Your Observations: This article has multiple issues. Please help improve it or discuss these issues on the talk page. (Learn how and when to remove these template messages) This article contains wording that promotes the subject in a subjective manner without imparting real information. (May 2022) This article may rely excessively on sources too closely associated with the subject, potentially preventing the article from being verifiable and neutral. (May 2022)

My Response: 1. I have tried my best not to use wording that promote the subject. Could you kindly identify those paragraphs in which such wording has been used? so that I may remove those sentences. 2. The second observation is that the references are too closely associated with the subject. I am sorry, I do not agree with this obseration. For example, Reference 2 is an article published in Science Magazine by a renowned Professor in 1976. Reference 3 is an article published officially by Sindh University in 1976. Reference 4 is from Encyclopedia Sindhiana, a highly reliable source of Sindhi Literature and information about Sindh. Reference 7 is a widely circulated English newspaper of Pakistan. I do not personally know the authors of other references quoted. But their information is consistent with the information provided in Official book published by Sindh University. Unfortunately, The literature regarding scietists of Sindh is hard to find in Print. I shall be continually tryoing to find more references, if available. Your further comments/objections/suggestions will be appreciated. Mukhtiaraliunar (talk) 04:11, 7 May 2022 (UTC) Mukhtiaraliunar[reply]