Talk:Suze (The Cough Song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 20:05, 23 August 2023 (UTC)

This should be done quickly! --K. Peake 20:05, 23 August 2023 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):

   b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a. (reference section):

   b. (citations to reliable sources):

   c. (OR):

   d. (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a. (major aspects):

   b. (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):

   b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/fail:

(Criteria marked are unassessed)

Infobox and lead

• How long ago dates were does not need to be noted in the infobox

• Fixed. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 09:30, 25 August 2023 (UTC)

• The exacty recording date and studio are not sourced anywhere in the body

• Added the details with a source. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 12:30, 30 August 2023 (UTC)

• WP:OVERLINK of Columbia under label(s)
• "during the sessions for" → "during the sessions for his third studio album,"
• "The track was written" → "The song was written"
• "by Dylan and produced by" → "by Dylan, and produced by"
• "started ninety seconds" → "started 90 seconds" per MOS:NUM
• Move the standalone sentence to being in the same para as the rest since this is not enough on its own
• "found the track enjoyable." → "found the song enjoyable."

• Fixed the seven points above. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 09:30, 25 August 2023 (UTC)

Background and recording

• Add a comma after E tuning
• "ninety seconds into" → "90 seconds into" per MOS:NUM
• "before saying that the song" → "until saying that the song" to avoid using before twice in one sentence

• I amended the article per the three points above. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 12:35, 30 August 2023 (UTC)

• "and the stanza's return." is this definitely about one stanza because if multiple, remove the apostrophe

• Source has "Dylan accompanies the bridge and stanza’s return with harmonica." BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 12:35, 30 August 2023 (UTC)

• Pipe Jimmie Tarlton to Darby and Tarlton
• Add double speech marks around "Percy's Song"

• I amended the article per the two points above. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 12:35, 30 August 2023 (UTC)

Release and reception

• The tense of reviews needs to be consistent

• Fixed. (Hopefully). BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 12:39, 30 August 2023 (UTC)

Personnel

• Good

References

• Copyvio score is totally non existent!
• Wikilink Columbia Records
• Wikilink Scarecrow Press per MOS:LINK2SECT

• Added the links. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 12:38, 30 August 2023 (UTC)

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 20:39, 23 August 2023 (UTC)

• Many thanks, K. Peake. Hopefully I've fixed everything, but let me know if more work is required. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 12:41, 30 August 2023 (UTC)

• ✓ Pass now, thanks for the response within the expected timeframe of a week! --K. Peake 18:25, 30 August 2023 (UTC)