Talk:Superunknown/GA1

GA Review

Hey there - just a few notes on getting this to GA standard.

"Regarding the change in producer, guitarist Kim Thayil said, "We just thought we'd go for a change." - context - who were the previous producers? The casual reader (eg. me) isn't aware it's their first time with Beinhorn or anything like that.
- Addressed.-5- (talk) 13:53, 1 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
"The individual band members would work on material on their own and then bring in demos which the other band members would help work on." - the repetition here "band members" and "work on" is a bit annoying...
- Addressed.-5- (talk) 13:57, 1 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Second and third paragraphs of the "Recording" section contains a lot of "the band..."... can you get some variety ("Soundgarden...", "they....")?
- Addressed.-5- (talk) 14:03, 1 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Hmm... only the release date for one of the singles is known? (infobox)
- Unfortunately, yes.-5- (talk) 14:04, 1 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
"The song "Spoonman" is notable for featuring a performance by Artis the Spoonman..." - sources for this paragraph?
- Addressed.-5- (talk) 14:46, 1 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
In the Release and reception section can you link the songs the first time you name them?
- Addressed.-5- (talk) 16:14, 1 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Do you really need the singles charts table?
- As a completist, I'm going to have to say yes.-5- (talk) 14:46, 1 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Yeah, that's about it. Please leave me a note when done... cheers. —Giggy 11:54, 1 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]