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Reviewer: Azealia911 (talk · contribs) 01:37, 9 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]


Hello, I'm Azealia911 talk and I'll be reviewing this article to see if it meets the good article criteria. A full reivew will be provided within 48 hours Azealia911 talk 01:37, 9 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Review:

  • I'm happy to inform you that on the large part, this article pretty much already meets the GA criteria, there are just a few tweaks I'd like you to implement. Once they've been addressed, I'll pass the article.

General

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  • There should be no space in S. Paulo, all uses should read S.Paulo.

Infobox and lead

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  • The cover image needs an alt.
  • Either add a caption to the cover image or remove Caption =
  • graffity → graffiti
  • A music video was shot → A music video for the track was shot
  • however it was controversial since Madonna wanted to dress as a "Terror Bride", which is a combination of an Iraqi bridal veil and a US soldier's uniform. Due to this reason she opted not to wear the dress or to finalize the video. → however, it was controversial since Madonna wanted to dress as a "Terror Bride", a combination of an Iraqi bridal veil and a US soldier's uniform. Subsequently, the video was never released.

Background and composition

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  • The Abbey Road Studios picture needs an alt.
  • Editing for the track was done → Editing for the track was completed
  • there's a repeated use of "by by"
  • "When it hits the bridge dubstep influences are also evident" is this a quote from someone? It sounds very journalistic-ly written, consider something like "During the songs bridge, dubstep influences can also be heard"

Artwork and release

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  • "a contest sponsored by Keep Walking Brazil project" is used twice in the same sentence, make the latter "after being among ten finalists in the contest"

Critical reception

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  • Try switching up the flow in this section, every sentence starts with "*article writer* from *publication*"
  • from Daily Mirror → from the Daily Mirror

Track listing

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  • Remove the quote marks in "Keep Walking Brazil"

Credits and personnel

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  • Please move the line about the liner notes to the top of the section

Charts

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  • I feel like the line about the downloads would fare better as a sentence before the chart box.
  • Make the columns unsortable

References

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  • PopMatters should be in italics
  • Unlink Digital Spy in ref #21


Not too much to do! Azealia911 talk 10:41, 9 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]


Looks perfect! Just quickly before I pass it, your edit summary for the first set of changes you made was "Temporarily change" are you planning to revert them as soon as I pass the article or something? Azealia911 talk 17:39, 9 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Lol, why would I do that. What I meant was that, after wards I will revisit those edits again while completing all the review comments. Sorry if it was misleading Azealia911. —Indian:BIO [ ChitChat ] 18:00, 9 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Haha, no worries. I was just concerned you'd return the article to the way you wanted it. Sorry for the bad faith! Passing Azealia911 talk 18:05, 9 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]