Talk:Supermarine Channel/GA1

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 11:58, 13 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

Could make redirects at Supermarine Channel Type and ~~Supermarine Channel II~~.
"Armstrong Siddeley Puma. Designed" should that be "Armstrong Siddeley Puma engine. Designed"?
" the Solent" it appears (and who knew?) that "the" is part of the formal title of the river.
"Norway's first airline" name? link?
And in other news, the formal name of "the River Orinoco" is just "the Orinoco".
"Supermarine Commercial Amphibian" is mentioned in the infobox as a variant, but not the Channel Type or the Channel II. And the Supermarine Commercial Amphibian isn't mentioned in the article.
"construction.The" space.
"although the number of passengers was limited to three" could just say "although limited to three"?
"Beardmore engine" you called it by its full name in the lead and not here. Probably better the other way round.
"10 Channels, five" 10/5 or ten/five.
"4-seater" four-seater.
You mention "Channel I aircraft" was Supermarine Channel I also another variant/title?
"acquired one aircraft." is that also referenced by [8]?
"Supermarine Aircraft since 1914 [8]" no space before ref.
Bullet before external link.

Thanks, @The Rambling Man: I believe the above points are now addressed. The infobox has been amended as only variants with their own article are listed. Amitchell125 (talk) 21:06, 17 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]