Talk:Super Fantasy Zone/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Kung Fu Man (talk · contribs) 02:20, 9 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I feel like some description of what Oopa looks like could make that first paragraph a bit meatier. Also looking up gameplay on youtube, can't this character fly and walk? Is there a difference gameplay wise between the two.
It seems like walking is an upgrade, so not typical gameplay. Though I instead decided to include it as part of his description.

Small thing, but I feel weapon loadout is the wrong term here and gives a different impression with the subsequent upgrades not being all weapons.

If possible I do feel the magazine citations could use page numbers, but I understand if some are not able to.

Spotcheck: checked references [14, [15], [17], [26], [27] (latter two confirmed by Internet Archive). Information is factually cited.--Kung Fu Man (talk) 02:20, 9 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, sorry, I'll fix up the refs in a bit. - Cukie Gherkin (talk) 03:17, 16 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Took care of them myself, wasn't able to online scans of a few of them but satisfied with the results overall. Passing.--Kung Fu Man (talk) 10:45, 23 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]