Talk:Sunshine Days/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 03:20, 22 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Unlink American per WP:OVERLINK
- Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Unlink television series per WP:OVERLINK
- Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"The episode first aired in the United States on May 12, 2002 on the Fox network" → "It originally aired on the Fox network on May 12, 2002"
- Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"unconnected to the series' wider mythology" should be "a stand-alone plot which is unconnected to the overarching fictional history of The X-Files"
- Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
To many "The episode", consider re-writing.
- Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:31, 22 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"The episode earned a Nielsen household rating of 6.2 and was viewed by 6.5 million households and 10.4 million viewers in its initial broadcast" → "The episode earned a Nielsen household rating of 6.2, was viewed by 6.5 million households, and 10.4 million viewers in its initial broadcast"
- Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
finale should be final
- Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Link California
- I linked Van Nuys, CA instead.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Add actor for Blake and Mike
- Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"was where the popular television series The Brady Bunch was filmed" → "where the comedy series The Brady Bunch was filmed. This is partly per WP:NPOV
- Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"Later that night" add comma
- Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Actor for Martin
- It's already there.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
discovers should be discover
Add actor for Fogelman
- Fogleman is the same person as Martin.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:15, 22 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Add actor for Oliver Martin
- It's already there.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:15, 22 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Add actor for various others
- Where are the other ones your are talking about? I didn't mention them in the prose and citing the whole Brady Family would be ridiculous.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Link Washington, DC
- Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Should be "Washington, D.C." not "Washington, DC"
- Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

finale should be final
- Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"The Brady Bunch house set featured in the episode was built "from scratch". Huh?
- Rephrased.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Link Nielsen household rating to Nielsen ratings
- Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"Fox Broadcasting Company promoted the episode with the promise that it was the "most bizarre" episode of The X-Files to ever been shown". Firstly, Fox Broadcasting Company should be Fox. Secondly, Fox should not be linked as it is already linked above
- Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Unlink season 9, and 20th Century Fox Home Entertainment as it already linked above
- Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
The Hollywood Reporter is missing publisher (Prometheus Global Media). The current one is incorrect
- According to its page, that's its owner, not publisher, but I'll switch it.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

That's all. On hold, and great work! TBran dl ey 03:40, 22 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]