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Reviewer: Casliber (talk · contribs) 04:17, 13 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]


Hi - I made copyedits as I go (please revert if I inadvertently changed the meaning) and jotted queries below: Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 04:17, 13 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Sunshine explores physics, science and religion - err, ok. sentence a bit short. Might flow better if fleshed out a little....
Preceding its initial screening to the public, the film was generally met with positive critical reviews, but was not considered a box office success. - why is the "preceding" segment here? Surely both items are not dependent on that...?
After completion of filming for Sunshine, Boyle said [that he would not revisit the science fiction genre, citing] production as a spiritually exhausting experience - can remove the bracketed bit as is stated again in next sentence. Or remove the latter instead.
The director had also received advice that there would be advanced space programs with India and Brazil, but the advice was overlooked to avoid creating a cast that was too disparate - "overlooked" an odd choice, "ignored" or "not taken up" better
Okay I wanna know...what is the alternative ending? Can slot in nicely after discussion of it....
This was partly due to "disputes" between the lawyers of Underworld and Fox Searchlight. - why the quotes? choose another word (to distance from source) and dequote
Did anyone talk about the sun-worship of two of the characters? Also the supernatural quality of the Icarus I captain?

Overall a good read. Not too much work required...


1. Well written?:

Prose quality: - see above
Manual of Style compliance:

2. Factually accurate and verifiable?:

References to sources: - some citations needed
Citations to reliable sources, where required:
No original research:

3. Broad in coverage?:

Major aspects: - see above
Focused:

4. Reflects a neutral point of view?:

Fair representation without bias:

5. Reasonably stable?

No edit wars, etc. (Vandalism does not count against GA):

6. Illustrated by images, when possible and appropriate?:

Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:


Overall:

Pass or Fail: - pending some issues to address outstanding issues listed above, which may be of help for future editors. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 09:33, 4 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]