Talk:Sunroom Nite

Did you know nomination

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 18:31, 14 April 2022 (UTC)

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• ... that manga artist Keiko Takemiya intentionally submitted her manga series Sanrūmu Nite immediately before its publication deadline to avoid it being edited? Source: Gentosha Plus (in Japanese)
  • ALT1: ... that manga artist Keiko Takemiya intentionally submitted her manga series Sanrūmu Nite immediately before its publication deadline so that its male-male romance subject material could not be edited? Source: Gentosha Plus (in Japanese)
  • ALT2: ... that Sanrūmu Nite was the first male-male romance manga? Source: Gentosha Plus (in Japanese)

• • Reviewed: Mary Renault
  • Comment: Adding User:KuroMina as a co-nominator as much of the article is written from sources they found. The co-nomination is not an expectation/obligation to participate in this DYK, though they are certainly welcome to do so.

Created by Morgan695 (talk) and KuroMina (talk). Nominated by Morgan695 (talk) at 01:13, 30 March 2022 (UTC).

• age and size ok, QPQ done, hook cited and faithful to source. good to go Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 03:41, 10 April 2022 (UTC)

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Sanrūmu Nite/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Tintor2 (talk · contribs) 22:48, 28 April 2022 (UTC)

I'll be reviewing this article. Its coverage seems appropiate but there are one or two stuff that I think needs to be fixed before passing it:

• The lead is kinda small, failing WP:Lead. Try at least writing two paragraphs even it's minor content.
  • Done.
• The nihongo in the plot might better fit as a note since covers a lot.
  • I think adding notes for names might get confusing, given the existing note for Serge's name; adding more would mean that two separate notes would be attached to his name, which feels excessive.
• Production: give more focus to girl's manga rather than the Japanese titles like shojo to make it easier to understand.
  • "Shōjo manga" is the proper name for this category of manga, so I'm not sure if there's a workaround here. Personally, I think it would be more confusing to oscillate between using "shōjo manga" and "girls' manga", rather than just maintaining consistency throughout the article. I personally don't think the term is excessively used; "shōjo" appears without a gloss just four times in the Production section (six including its use in the proper title Bessatsu Shōjo Comic).

@Morgan695: That's all. Remember to ping me.Tintor2 (talk) 22:48, 28 April 2022 (UTC)

• @Tintor2: Hi, reply above. Morgan695 (talk) 23:30, 28 April 2022 (UTC)