Talk:Summer's Dream

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This seems to be a really good start to summarizing the plot of the book, but a little more detail is needed in places. Information is needed on the relationship of these characters to each other e.g. what is the relationship of Summer to Paddy and Charlotte? Who is the "their" in the second sentence referring to? When Sylvia Rochelle calls the girls, is this in person after practice, or via a phone call? Did she arrive late to the Royal Ballet School just once, or multiple times? Was this on the same time as she suffered from stage fright? How specifically does she sacrifice her friends and family? What film crew? Who is Finch? Need to clarify that "seeing stars" is a the same as "feeling faint" if this is what is going on. Where is Alfie taking her away to?Alexalaxela (talk) 03:51, 6 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]