Talk:Sukumar/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 17:40, 12 March 2016 (UTC)

I'll definitely finish this tomorrow JAGUAR  17:40, 12 March 2016 (UTC)

Initial comments

• The lead is perfect. I couldn't find any issues here. Nice work!
• "Sukumar was born on 11 January 1970,[1] in Mattaparru, a village in the West Godavari district of Andhra Pradesh" - this doesn't mention it was near Razole

Reference 2 did. I forgot to include that. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 00:09, 14 March 2016 (UTC)

• "Razole and graduated with a Masters degree in Mathematics" - I think it's best to de-capitalise mathematics as not only was it capitalised in the lead, but I don't think it needs a capital in this case anyway

Done

• "Due to lack of earnings, Sukumar briefly continue to teach students" - continued

Done

• "Unlike Arya, Jagadam focused more on violence and in an interview to South Scope" - would sound better as in an interview with South Scope (minor)

Done

• "In an interview to Deccan Chronicle" - again, with is preferable

Done

• No dead links

I had to do this quickly before my internet dropped out! This is truly among your best articles, I couldn't find anything worthy enough to constitute putting this on hold. It is well written, comprehensive and the references are all in good shape. Well done! JAGUAR  23:06, 13 March 2016 (UTC)

Thanks for taking up the review, Jaguar! Much appreciated! Pavanjandhyala (talk) 00:09, 14 March 2016 (UTC)