Talk:Sukhoi Su-33/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 15:12, 27 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 15:12, 27 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I read through this last night and didn't see any issues, but I was half asleep so I'll read through it again later today to see what I can find. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 18:11, 29 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Here are the issues I found:

"In the event, insufficient funding was secured" I'd either rephrase to 'in any event', or ideally just drop that starter entirely.
Link Crimea.
"A takeoff ramp was installed the complex" on/in the complex
"However, when the aircraft was front of it for longer than the maximum 6 seconds" six can be written out here.
"manoeuvrability" maybe it's spelled differently in British English but I'm still sure there's a typo there.
That's the English spelling.
The operators section feels like it can be merged with the operational history section, since the former doesn't say much the other doesn't.

I agree. But the "Operational history" section talks about conflicts and deployments, while "Operators" summarises which regiment or squadron the aircraft serves with. Merged

I'll put the article on hold for a week and will pass it when the issues are fixed. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 03:45, 30 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I'm done with your requests. Anymore problems? BTW, I've reviewed Aruba at the 2008 Summer Olympics. Sp33dyphil ^{"Ad astra"} 04:22, 30 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I went and fixed the issues over there. I don't see anymore problems so I'll pass this as a GA. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 16:49, 30 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]