Talk:Suillellus luridus/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Khazar2 (talk · contribs) 06:10, 7 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I'll be glad to take this review. Initial comments to follow in the next 1-3 days. Thanks in advance for your work on this one! -- Khazar2 (talk) 06:10, 7 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Checklist

This looks really excellent on first pass. I see no issues and am proceeding to the checklist.

Rate	Attribute	Review Comment
1. Well-written:
	1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct.	Prose is good; spotchecks show no evidence of copyright issues.
	1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation.
2. Verifiable with no original research:
	2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline.
	2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose).
	2c. it contains no original research.
3. Broad in its coverage:
	3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic.
	3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style).
	4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.
	5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:
	6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content.
	6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions.
	7. Overall assessment.	Pass as GA

That's a big pass! But please note that I made some minor copyedits as I went. Please double-check that I haven't accidentally introduced any error, and feel free to revert anything you disagree with.

All copyedits look good - I can see the idea behind the splitting of the sentence with the second clause commencing, "Some guidebooks...." - I might go with a semicolon there....Casliber (talk · contribs) 07:00, 7 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Go for it. =) -- Khazar2 (talk) 07:03, 7 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]