Talk:Suavemente/GA1

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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 03:55, 2 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox

You could probably be a bit more descriptive in the "alt" for the album cover image

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"Suavemente" (the single) was released on April 4, 1998

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I understand that some red links on Wikipedia are okay, but since they are the only two in the article, I'd remove the links for "Luna Llena" and "Nuestra Canción"

I will be creating those articles shortly.

Lead

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Link Billboard for the first time please to the article "Billboard (magazine)"

It is linked?

In all cases: U.S. --> US

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Background

Insert a comma after "In 1996" please

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Release and promotion

In all cases: U.S. --> US

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Insert a comma after "On November 28" please

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Rest is absolutely great! Very informative

Thank you

Reception

Link "AllMusic" in the "Review scores" box please

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And, Terry Jenkins' AllMusic review is quite short (and even though the actual review is equally short), you could probably state what tracks he highlighted, since he seems to list quite a few in his review

Added about the mode tune AllMusic listed.

Chart history

In all cases: U.S. --> US

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Insert a comma after "During its fifth straight week atop the Tropical Albums" please

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Singles

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"U.S. Billboard Hot 100 chart..." --> "US Billboard Hot 100 chart..."

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"U.S. radio stations..." --> "US radio stations..."

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Again, I don't know if you need to the link to two non-existent singles' articles... What do you think?
Although this section is quite informative, it is quite long for an album page, and is usually combined with the "Promotion" section; not like there's a problem with this or anything

If you feel as though it is too long then I'll trim it if that's an issue?

Impact

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In all cases: U.S. --> US

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Last sentence reworded as "The lead single also became a popular tune in Mexico, where it was used in festivals around the country.[66]" please

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Track listing

The "Producer(s)" column is completely empty? I don't know if this was a mistake, or...???

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The "Producer(s)" column is still empty; rest is fine

Unfortunately, AllMusic did not provide this nor did Crespo in the booklet; it only lists the arrangers for each track instead. – jona ✉ 21:41, 12 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I have removed it. If you own the CD, perhaps you could check over it? But it's definitely fine for now! Thanks, Carbrera (talk) 02:41, 13 June 2016 (UTC).[reply]

Any other editions of the album?

There are details about the international releases of the album in the 'release' section.

Is the writer for "Princesita" really unknown??

AllMusic didn't know, but I have the CD and I added the composer.

Charts

Chart positions

The "US Billboard 200" should be the first chart listed here

Done

Other notes

Is there a "Credits and personnel" section that you could add?

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Also, please add a "Release history" section to the article as well
You could add an "External links" section that includes a link to the master copy of the album's "Discogs" page

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Add "Category:1998 albums" to the list of categories please

Done

End of GA Review:

Another great article from you! I hope to continue reviewing your articles! Meanwhile, this article will be on hold for seven days to allow for changes and any comments/suggestions to be made. Good luck and cheers, Carbrera (talk) 02:45, 12 June 2016 (UTC)![reply]

Thanks for your kind words, I have since fixed all issues you pointed out. Thanks again for your review, – jona ✉ 13:08, 12 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]