Talk:Stratford Dialectical and Radical Club/GA1
Appearance
GA Review
[edit]GA toolbox |
---|
Reviewing |
Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch
Reviewer: Catrìona (talk · contribs) 21:53, 27 August 2018 (UTC)
Please reply individually under each of my comments and mark with Done, Fixed, Added, Not done, Doing..., or Removed, followed by any comment you'd like to make. Catrìona (talk) 22:58, 13 August 2018 (UTC)
This article is in very good shape. Some suggestions:
- What is the "Mile End Waste"?
- Done I've added a footnote explaining the location and its usage. This is what it looks like today; note the statue of William Booth, far left :)
- Is there any information on specifically how and when the club ended?
- Nothing certain I'm afraid, although I've looked over again. The SDRC was formative in founding the Social Democratic Federation in 1884, and I get the impression that they might have merged into that. But, it's only my opinion, not RS at all!
at the time this was a fundamental, and difficult, question
what was?- Done I've put the emphasis back on the secular/socialist; I think that reads clearer now? Thanks for the review Catriona, much appreciated as ever. —SerialNumber54129 paranoia /cheap sh*t room
- @Catrìona: I do apologise, I previously pinged someone who hasn't edited for over a year!!! —SerialNumber54129 paranoia /cheap sh*t room 08:33, 29 August 2018 (UTC)
- No problem! Everything looks good. I'm going to pass it, AGF on sources. Catrìona (talk) 15:38, 29 August 2018 (UTC)
- @Catrìona: I do apologise, I previously pinged someone who hasn't edited for over a year!!! —SerialNumber54129 paranoia /cheap sh*t room 08:33, 29 August 2018 (UTC)
- Done I've put the emphasis back on the secular/socialist; I think that reads clearer now? Thanks for the review Catriona, much appreciated as ever. —SerialNumber54129 paranoia /cheap sh*t room
Good Article review progress box
|