Talk:Strabops/GA1

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Reviewer: Dunkleosteus77 (talk · contribs) 18:16, 19 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Dunkleosteus77

~~"with a lateral margin rounded anteriorly," did you just say the head is round?~~ User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk 18:16, 19 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, changed to "rounded outline". Super Ψ Dro 19:02, 19 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

~~Does eurypterid start with an e sound or a y sound?~~ User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk 18:16, 19 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I am not the most suitable for pronunciations but I would say "y". I think I know what you mean and I have to say that I did not know this gramatical rule.

~~What was the similarly-named Aglaspida subclass?~~ User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk 18:16, 19 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

A clade that encompassed all the definitely aglaspidid genera, strabopids and other uncertain genera. Should I explain the included clades in the article?

No what was the name of the subclass? User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk 20:12, 19 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Aglaspida, it is similarly named to Aglaspidida.

Oh I see, I just misread it User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk 00:27, 21 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

~~You should probably say the Xiphosura are horseshoe crabs~~ User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk 18:16, 19 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Done.

~~Why are some of the taxa in the cladogram bolded?~~ User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk 18:16, 19 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

They represent the major chelicerate groups. Now this is stated in the article.

You should probably put that in the caption of the cladogram ("Bolded taxa are...") User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk 20:12, 19 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

You mean this?

Sorry, I was looking below the cladogram User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk 00:27, 21 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

In the taxobox you specify only the type species T. thacheri implying there are more, but since there's only one species, you want to use {{speciesbox}}. But that's a really minor thing, so I'll go ahead and pass User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk 00:27, 21 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Done.

~~And tiny grammar thing, in the future, "further" is a synonym of "also," and "farther" is a measure of distance (for example, "...And further, I think you can throw the ball farther")~~ User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk 00:27, 21 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review! I'll take that into consideration. Super Ψ Dro 23:47, 21 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]