Talk:Strabane Grammar School

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High Staff

I'll remove the part about high staff because of vandalism

Location

"attractive 27 acres (110,000 m2) of wooded grounds provide a stunning landscape and relaxed atmosphere" This is opinated, not right for wikipedia standards. I know that it is not as large as 27 acres but I do not have a reference for the exact size so I did not change it. Just thought I'd point this out to the creators.

Besides I believe this ground is not owned by SGS so theres no need for it at all.

Aims

I think the part on the aims of the school is sort of opinionated. Could I get the opinion from other editors on whether it's opinionated before I remove it? 72Volt (talk) 13:39, 10 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, it reads as a free advert rather than encyclopaedic. A link to 'aims' would be fair enough with anything about their aims that appears out of the ordinary compared to the majority of other schools. Statements such as "To equip pupils with the skills needed to develop good relationships" are just embarrassing, and would appear to be poorly written non-specific waffle rather than aims even if only published on the school's own website. Fæ (talk) 13:44, 10 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]