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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Stewart Friesen/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 07:51, 27 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Will review. MWright96 (talk) 07:51, 27 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Lead

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Early years

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  • "Friesen got hooked on racing early in life," - the text in bold is informal  Done, changed "got hooked" to "started." NASCARfan0548  23:09, 27 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "After racing go-karts," - this portion of text needs a citation verifying that its correct

I need help with this one, @Bcschneider53:. What citation can I find? NASCARfan0548  23:09, 27 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

  • Any more details on his achievements in go-karting?

I have no idea. NASCARfan0548  23:09, 27 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Gander RV & Outdoors Truck Series

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I need help with that, @Bcschneider53:. What is the best source for that? NASCARfan0548  23:09, 27 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I need help with this one, @Bcschneider53:. What is the best source? NASCARfan0548  23:09, 27 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Personal life

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I can't find a source on that. NASCARfan0548  23:09, 27 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Motorsports career results: Gander RV & Outdoors Truck Series

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References

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Ref 1 doesn't show a publication date. Same thing for Refs 2 and 3. Ref 2 is dead, so could you please archive the refs that are dead? Ref 6 has no publication date shown. Refs 10, 12, and 19 don't show publication dates. I did all of the refs which had publication dates in them. NASCARfan0548  01:26, 1 December 2020 (UTC) Now I did all of the missing authors I can find. NASCARfan0548  16:20, 1 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Removed. NASCARfan0548  23:09, 27 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Am going to put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address or query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 20:06, 27 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@NASCARfan0548: I am trying to finish my last week of college online before I graduate, so my time is limited right now. Even so, Max, I encourage you to seek these sources out yourself. You nominated the article, so it's up to you to bring it to GA standards. Sometimes, that includes research for citations. Hope that helps, --Bcschneider53 (talk) 03:29, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Bcschneider53, OK NASCARfan0548  04:19, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Bcschneider53, Thank you for fixing the URLs. NASCARfan0548  20:44, 1 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

After fixing most of these issues I can fix, is the article ready for GA yet, @MWright96:? NASCARfan0548  16:20, 1 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Did you know nomination

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk23:06, 13 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Improved to Good Article status by NASCARfan0548 (talk). Self-nominated at 21:45, 1 December 2020 (UTC).[reply]

  • This article is a newly promoted GA and meets the newness and length criteria. The hook facts are cited inline, the article is neutral and I detected no copyright issues. No QPQ needed here. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:13, 7 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]