Talk:Steven Halpern

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I have changed a sentence that said Halpern's music affects the chakras. The trouble here is that the text assumes that this actually works (violating the golden rule of Neutral Point of View). It also assumes that everyone knows what chakras are, which ignores the fact that many people who read the article have never heard of chakras. It also assumes that chakras exist, which is another Point of View. Sardaka (talk) 08:01, 1 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]