Talk:Stephen P. MacMillan

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This article was nominated for deletion on 19 August 2023. The result of the discussion was no consensus.

Issues with article that I tagged

I went ahead and tagged the page with several issues this article has. First, the first paragraph of "Career" is oddly formatted. Second, the wording of that aforementioned paragraph within the article does not seem to conform to WP:NPOV (including but not limited to phrases such as "world leader in innovative medical technology," "successfully led the company through a series of key strategic acquisitions," and "delivered strong operating performance." Third, several sentences are copied directly from a 2013 Hologic press release entitled "Hologic Appoints Stephen P. MacMillan President and Chief Executive Officer" (https://investors.hologic.com/press-releases/press-release-details/2013/Hologic-Appoints-Stephen-P-MacMillan-President-and-Chief-Executive-Officer/default.aspx). Wikipedialuva (talk) 00:38, 20 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Upon more investigation, it appears that the IP 75.80.116.101 on October 8 and October 10, 2020 went through and removed information related to his ex-wife (some of which I have just restored) and removed references WP:RS such as Bloomberg and labeling these edits as "incorrect information." The IP then proceeded to post positive information about him. Wikipedialuva (talk) 01:14, 20 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Undisclosed Paid Editing

Recent siginificant edits were made by a now exposed Upwork contractor: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Conflict_of_interest/Noticeboard#Edward_Forman — Preceding unsigned comment added by 166.144.222.42 (talk) 04:21, 17 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Not contracted to work on this article (all paid contribution listed in user page as a result of the COIN). On contrary, did some research with the intention to submit AfD. There is some coverage, so I am on the fence. Need an expert in business executives to take a look. Sabih omar 18:39, 17 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]