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In 943... This sentence could be revised to make it a little smoother.
Who were the unnamed sisters married to?
What was the college of emperors?
Who was the father-in-law Gabalas? What did he do?
The part about Constantine's reluctance to participate in the coup seems contradictory to the statement directly above it.
The paragraph beginning, Having managed to quietly depose their father... seemed a tad choppy. The second sentence in particular could be deleted or combined with the first to offer a more concise description of their situation.
Throughout the article, there are italicized terms. Could you give some cursory descriptions of the jobs associated with those positions?
Make sure you watch out for phrases like "second oldest son." Just say "second son." Also, the lead needs to be revised to include more details and greater clarity. Who did Stephen serve as co-emperor with? Finally, be sure that you check for spelling and grammar throughout the article.
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
Overall:
Pass or Fail:
I am deeply sorry for the time it has taken me to complete this, but you've done good work on the article and I am passing it for GA. dci | TALK 22:03, 16 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Hello! I've made some copyediting and additions on the points you raised, plus some other tweaks. On the "college of emperors", it merely means the group of co-emperors headed by Romanos I. I couldn't think of a better term to express this ("group of co-emperors" is a bit awkward), any ideas? Constantine ✍ 17:23, 28 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]
