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Reviewer: Yashthepunisher (talk) 08:19, 12 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]


I'll review this soon. Yashthepunisher (talk) 08:19, 12 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

  • "The Stephen Court fire was a major fire in a historical building.." Which building?
  • I believe the name 'Calcutta' was during the Britishers, now its 'Kolkata'.
  • You can also mention the states name in the lead and infobox.
  • "A delay in the start of rescue operations was experienced due to inadequate planning." A 'the' is missing somewhere.
  • How many people were their on the floors? Were there any injured people who survived?
  • The second sentence in the 'Original construction' section seems too long. try splitting it into two.
  • "The civic authorities slapped a notice of building code violation on the building's management authorities." Slapped a notice seems informal, kindly rephrase it.
  • regularized --> regularised. Indian english.
  • "Further investigation revealed a lack of maintenance of the electrical circuitry leading to exposed live wires in the basement, and the wooden main stairs made the building a tinderbox." This sentence should be placed after the incident is mentioned in the article's body.
  • Provide alt text for the image.
  • Link IST in the lead.
  • "In 2016, an unregistered company took the initiative of restoring the heritage building to its former glory." Any name of the company? Also the 'former glory' seems POV-ish.

Yashthepunisher (talk) 11:26, 12 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Source review

  • Archive ref 6.
  • www.telegraphindia.com --> The Telegraph
  • dna --> Daily News and Analysis
  • NDTV.com --> NDTV
  • Date missing from ref 6.
  • Ref 9 is missing author and date.
  • NDTV Convergence Limited --> NDTV
  • Sify Technologies Ltd --> Sify
  • Link the publishers on their first instance and delink them elsewhere.

Yashthepunisher (talk) 11:39, 12 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Yashthepunisher Done mostly. There are only two problems:
  • Ref 6 won't archive (I even went to archive.org but found that the snapshots preserved were redirecting to a non-existent page.
  • The number of residents living in those floors are quoted differently by different leading dailies (Times of India:300,The Hindu:101,The Telegraph:70) since I could not come to a decision as to which source to use, I decided against adding that information altogether.

All the other comments have been implemented smoothly  — FR+ 10:14, 13 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

The article is in fine shape and meets the GA criteria's IMO. Great work Force Radical. Pass Yashthepunisher (talk) 12:16, 13 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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