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Reviewer: Status (talk · contribs) 23:36, 15 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

 Done
Nothing wrong with links.
Lead / Infobox
  • Formats are not used for songs. It isn't just available digitally, is it?
 Done
  • Additional production should be shown in the infobox.
No clue how to do that, I've never seen that done before. - (CK)Lakeshade - talk2me - 04:46, 16 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Link accordion
 Done
  • Should specify that Pebe is her mother.
✗ Not done Added to body, not needed in the lead - (CK)Lakeshade - talk2me - 04:46, 16 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Done by Kesha? What about using performed?
 Done
  • up its release --> up its release?
✗ Not done How is that ambiguous? Upon its release - the album release. No one will get that confused. - (CK)Lakeshade - talk2me - 04:46, 16 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • A little about what happens in the video?
✗ Not done It's not really needed in the lead as the article is short and should comply with LEAD. - (CK)Lakeshade - talk2me - 04:46, 16 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • and was released on the repackaging of the singer's debut album, Animal + Cannibal. --> Don't think this is relevant to the lead.
✗ Not done I believe it's relevant as it shows how and why the video was made, as opposed to being a single. - (CK)Lakeshade - talk2me - 04:46, 16 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Writing and inspiration
  • "Stephen" is a song written by Kesha Sebert, in collaboration with David Gamson, Pebe Sebert, and Oliver Leiber; the song's production was yielded by Gamson with additional co-production done by Lieber --> "Stephen" was written by Kesha Sebert, in collaboration with her mother Pebe Sebert, David Gamson and Oliver Leiber. The song's production was yielded by Gamson with additional production by Lieber.
 Done
  • Done by Kesha, again
 Done
  • Link accordion again
 Done
  • six-teen --> sixteen
 Done
Composition
  • "Stephen" is a song composed in the dance-pop genre; the song also incorporates country elements --> "Stephen" is a dance-pop song that also incorporates elements of country music.
 Done
  • According to digital sheet music published at Musicnotes.com by Sony-ATV Music Publishing --> No need to state this.
✗ Not done - See WP:MUSICNOTES, this is a required inclusion since the day this website was deemed reliable. - (CK)Lakeshade - talk2me - 04:46, 16 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Music sample?
Will add later, I just haven't had a change to upload it. - (CK)Lakeshade - talk2me - 04:46, 16 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Critical reception
  • A few issues with the use of quotation marks in a quote, and the lack of a colon before a quote. The rest is pretty well done.
 Done Believe I corrected them, if not being bold would be much appreciated. - (CK)Lakeshade - talk2me - 04:46, 16 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Music video
  • who have also direct videos for the singer's songs --> who have also directed videos for Kesha's
 Done Oops, didn't notice the grammatical mistake. - (CK)Lakeshade - talk2me - 04:46, 16 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • and an alternative video for the song "Take It Off" --> and an alternative video of "Take It Off"
 Done
  • under its re-release Animal + Cannibal. --> entitled Animal + Cannibal
 Done
  • The video's synopsis opens --> The video opens...
 Done
Track listing
  • No need for this. "Stephen" was never released as track one on anything.
✗ Not done - There's no rule about this other than personal preference and not something to argue. The track listing is included to show how the track is available for purchase, whether being a single or not is irrelevant. - (CK)Lakeshade - talk2me - 04:46, 16 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Charts
  • Upon the release of Animal, "Stephen" debuted and peaked at number at eighty-nine on the issue date of January 3, 2010, on the South Korea Gaon International Songs Chart; it was the ninth highest debuting album track from its parent album. --> Split into two sentences.
 Done
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