Talk:Stephanie McMahon/GA1

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Hello, I will be reviewing this article. Check back soon for a full review! CarpetCrawler^{message me} 06:42, 28 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

GA on hold

Overall, this article looks good. However, I have a few concerns.

- Just a comment, not a fan of the current picture. It looks like she's doing a Budweiser commercial. "Wassssssuuuupppp!"

I'm not either because I think it makes her face look fat. If she stays involved in the current McMahons vs. Legacy storyline, I think it is safe to assume that someone will take a better one. Nikki♥311 21:16, 30 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

OK, let's hope someone adds one. :) CarpetCrawler^{message me} 00:04, 2 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]

- Is that all you can find for her early life? It seems a little short and stubby. I seem to remember that she did modeling for their magazine, modeling shirts and such, when she was younger.

You're right. I've added that and a bit more. If it still seems short, maybe I could merge it into the personal life section at the end. Nikki♥311 21:16, 30 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Looks a little better. Very passable. If someone else disagrees I'm sure a good compromise would be to add it to the personal life section. CarpetCrawler^{message me} 00:04, 2 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]

- Wikify "low blow", incase readers come to the page wondering what exactly a low blow is.

Done. Nikki♥311 21:16, 30 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

- "McMahon later became Angle's manager and was in his corner when he defeated The Rock for the WWF Championship at No Mercy.[22] The alliance was short lived, as The Rock performed his Rock Bottom maneuver on Stephanie at No Mercy.[23]" The second sentence makes it sound like she was in the Rock's corner. Maybe you could clarify/elaborate on why Angle and McMahon split up?

Explained. Nikki♥311 21:38, 30 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

- "On the March 25 episode of Raw, Jericho and McMahon lost to Triple H in a Triple Threat match for the Undisputed Championship, with the stipulation that, if McMahon was pinned, she would be forced to leave the WWF.[35]" So, who was pinned?

Added. Nikki♥311 21:38, 30 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

- "In October 2005, she was involved in the firing of Raw announcer Jim Ross.[44]" How exactly was she involved? What did she do?

She fired him. :)

- Some of the Backstage roles could use some wikifying. :)

Done. Nikki♥311 21:38, 30 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

- The last paragraph of "Personal life" could be placed into another paragraph, it's a littly stubby by itself.

I just removed it. The link was dead, and I couldn't find a suitable replacement. There wasn't much more to say about it anyway. Nikki♥311 21:38, 30 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Until my concerns have been addressed, I will place this article on hold. Please leave a message on my talkpage when you have addressed my concerns, or if you have any questions. Good work so far! CarpetCrawler^{message me} 17:09, 29 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks. I'll get to these this weekend. Nikki♥311 23:43, 29 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

OK, the article looks good, so I'll pass it now! Great work by everyone involved. :) CarpetCrawler^{message me} 00:04, 2 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]